Wednesday, July 24, 2019

I CAN SEE YOU - WRITING PROMPT


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Whiskers saw the fish bowl and jumped up on to the bench.  He quietly said, "I can see you!"  Then Mum came in.  Whiskers carefully put the fish in his mouth.  Mum shouted "put it down!"  Whiskers put it down.  So Whiskers put it back into the fish bowl.
By Neva

Whiskers was in the kitchen but then Whiskers spotted a goldfish.  So he jumped on to a stool and for a whole hour, he looked at him.  Then Mum came in and said "Get off! Naughty Cat!" As she pushed him off.  She saved the goldfish.
By Reuben

Lily jumped up on the kitchen bench to get the goldfish.  The bowl was glass.  I went to go to the kitchen bench and I saw Lily on the bench.  I called to Mum and she came and she told Lily off.  Mum pushed Lily off the bench.
By Ruby

Whiskers the cat jumped up on the bench and stared at the fish.  "Meow, meow!" said the cat.  He was while and the fish is orange.  Suddenly the cat put paws on the glass.  "Yummy" said the cat and then the cat ate the fish.  The fish was gone!  Mum came in a the fish was gone.  It was in the cat's tummy.  Rumble, rumble!
By Jacob P

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