Monday, August 5, 2019

LOST TEDDY - PUBLISHED WRITING

 
Once my family went to Wellington on a train.  My little sister loved her stuffed bear.  She looked out of the window, with her favourite bear but she suddenly dropped it.  She said, "nooooooo!!!"  She cried for hours and hours.  When we got there, she said "Dad, please can you get it for me,"
Me and my Dad and my sister searched.  After a while, we found it on the train track.  She said, "yay!"
By Bower

Annabell was looking out the window.  Suddenly the teddy fell out the window.  Then she shouted, "nooooo!"  She... told Dad.  He said, "We can get it when we get there."
Annabell and her Dad eventually got to the station and went back to find it.  She was happy.  She cuddled the ted.
by Sophia


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