SPILT MILK - EXPLANATION

Today in Mrs Lunn's Literacy Group, we continued learning to write explanations.  We had to look carefully at the picture and then explain what we think was happening.

 

When the milkman delivered the family milk, a strange cat came out of nowhere and sadly knocked over the milk on the deck.
By Alyssa

I think the milkman got one hundred bottles of milk delivered to a family in Auckland.  The cat came to the doorstep and knocked a bottle over.  The cat drank the milk from the bottle.  Now the family had ninety nine bottles.
By Mason P

When the milkman delivered the family's milk, suddenly the cat scrapped his face on the side of the bottle.  Crash!  The milk dripped.  Then he lapped up the creamy milk.  When he finished the milk, he did it to every other one.  Mum said ... "You are in big trouble.  You are supposed to tell us if we have milk.  You are grounded!"
By Ava

One day the milkman delivered the milk and left it on the front doorstep.  Boof!  The kitten knocked over a milk bottle on the step.   Crash! Crash! Crash!  went the milk.  Then there was only five left in the tray of milk.  When the owner came out of the house, the owner said, "Naughty, naughty little kitten.  Stay in the house!"
By Amelia

One day I was going up to my door step.  When I got there I saw some white stuff on the ground.  My brother left the door open and my cat came out and spilt all the milk bottles.  Splash!  The milk went flying everywhere.  It went all over me!
By Reuben

When the milkman delivered the milk, a random cat jumped up on to the door step and tipped over one bottle of milk.
By Samuel

One day the milkman delivered some milk for the family.  A strange cat didn't look where he was going.  Crash went the milk bottle!  The cat was disappointed because he knocked over the milk on the deck.  The cat was hungry.  Then he began to lap up the creamy milk.
By Coltyn

I think the wind spilt the mile over.  and the cat licked the milk.  The milk dripped off the steps and onto the stones.
By Tryton

One day a cat found spilt milk on the door step and he drank up the milk.
By Jed

When a strange cat came along the milkman had no space to put one bottle.  So he carried the six bottles and put them at the front door.  The cat knocked over the milk.  "Oh no!"
By Jacob N

One sunny day the milk man delivered the milk to the family's house but a kitten knocked the milk down on to the concrete.  Then she got told off for knocking the milk down.
By Jacob P